tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1428969590789818099.post895350063477591144..comments2024-03-26T21:49:20.994+01:00Comments on Rheumatologe: Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques No. 22 double entendre (double meaning)Rheumatologehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16169204718725630420noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1428969590789818099.post-74203810072581202782015-12-09T18:57:17.834+01:002015-12-09T18:57:17.834+01:00Great use of "double entendre" Lothar. v...Great use of "double entendre" Lothar. very implicit in your second haiku. Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1428969590789818099.post-47388674317059128842015-12-09T08:02:24.316+01:002015-12-09T08:02:24.316+01:00Ah ... nicely done, but I agree with Dove Dungeon ...Ah ... nicely done, but I agree with Dove Dungeon .. the symbols are a tad distracting ... BastetAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13596079559559123392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1428969590789818099.post-1136364990792676352015-12-09T04:53:43.900+01:002015-12-09T04:53:43.900+01:00No doubt the moon enjoys :)
A nice second haiku, t...No doubt the moon enjoys :)<br />A nice second haiku, too, but the symbols interfere a bit. <br />Great takes on the prompt ---JPShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16424128201322081345noreply@blogger.com