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Wednesday, September 23, 2015

Carpe Diem Special No. 168 Autumn "tonight's moon"


Waning moon’s sickle
The air is getting colder
Soon too cold for bats

Wet, cold autumn night
Moon is seeking company
Scarecrow invites him

Sickle moon and Venus
Autumn kills the merry sounds
Still no early bird



http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.de/2015/09/carpe-diem-special-168-autumn-tonights.html


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7 comments:

  1. sunaina sharmaSeptember 23, 2015 at 8:30 PM

    yes...the moon is lonely too......seeking company.....beautiful.....

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  2. UnknownSeptember 24, 2015 at 4:29 AM

    well written

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  3. UnknownSeptember 24, 2015 at 4:42 AM

    Your 2nd haiku is really very very good..

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  4. ChèvrefeuilleSeptember 24, 2015 at 7:15 AM

    What a beautiful trio of haiku; that second haiku is my favorite ... thank you for sharing Lothar

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  5. Bastet's Waka LibrarySeptember 24, 2015 at 6:39 PM

    A lovely tris of haiku .. I don't have a particular favourite ku ... each one has a feeling of mystery. Bastet

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  6. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 24, 2015 at 7:01 PM

    I think the scarecrow and the moon make great companions.

    Waiting for Moonrise

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    1. RheumatologeSeptember 25, 2015 at 6:51 AM

      Yes, I guess so. I like Li Bo (李白) drinking with the moon and his shadow as companions.

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