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Wednesday, November 4, 2015

Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques No. 17 Leap Linkage




Pitch dark
Striking a match
To stumble

Straight ahead
The winding road
Until it’s even

The rough waves
End in a roaring surf
To roll back


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8 comments:

  1. Reading PleasureNovember 4, 2015 at 3:04 PM

    Great set! The third one is very powerful.

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  2. B i r g i t t aNovember 4, 2015 at 6:52 PM

    Very poetic

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  3. AnonymousNovember 5, 2015 at 4:39 AM

    Oh, I do love this trio, especially the first and third. :)

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  4. ChèvrefeuilleNovember 5, 2015 at 4:57 AM

    Beautiful Lothar, as Celestine is saying ... your last haiku is really strong.

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  5. Bastet's Waka LibraryNovember 5, 2015 at 8:13 AM

    Beautiful write. Bastet

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  6. RheumatologeNovember 5, 2015 at 8:48 AM

    Thanks! The 3rd haiku is also my favourite one.

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  7. Carol CampbellNovember 5, 2015 at 4:17 PM

    All three are wonderful but the second one is my favorite!

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  8. humbirdNovember 5, 2015 at 10:40 PM

    Moving haiku..my fave is second with mysterious winding road....

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