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funny rhyming.
Excellent yugen haiku Lothar. I like the 'mystery' in your last haiku.
Nicely done ... I feel the ache in the first, and the third makes me pause ... very thoughtful ...!
The first two are very thoughtful...I really felt the yugen buried within
Deep!
Well done! Great imagery. I can feel the aches with each tick.
Very interesting!
Wow ... and scarecrows sleep of course to be awoken in spring ;-) Bastet
funny rhyming.
ReplyDeleteExcellent yugen haiku Lothar. I like the 'mystery' in your last haiku.
ReplyDeleteNicely done ... I feel the ache in the first, and the third makes me pause ... very thoughtful ...!
ReplyDeleteThe first two are very thoughtful...I really felt the yugen buried within
ReplyDeleteDeep!
ReplyDeleteWell done! Great imagery. I can feel the aches with each tick.
ReplyDeleteVery interesting!
ReplyDeleteWow ... and scarecrows sleep of course to be awoken in spring ;-) Bastet
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