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Wednesday, November 25, 2015

Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques No. 20 Paradox


Eyes shut
The monk sees the whole world
Mere nothing

The dry cleaner
Delivering clothes
Through the rain

November
Sunshine falls in
Snowflakes


http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.de/2015/11/carpe-diem-haiku-writing-techniques-20.html

PS.
Just found an old Haiku that might fit in:
This night 
Too cold 
For leaves to tremble



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6 comments:

  1. TournesolDansUnJardinNovember 25, 2015 at 7:39 AM

    all lovely response to this prompt for that last one you "just" found surely fits in spendidly...just wow!!

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  2. Adas AlcoveNovember 25, 2015 at 12:34 PM

    Wow! Nicely done.

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  3. jazzytowerNovember 25, 2015 at 2:41 PM

    Wow! I think you nailed it with all of them.

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  4. lynn__November 25, 2015 at 10:55 PM

    The "dry" cleaner made me chuckle...excellent series!

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  5. Carol CampbellNovember 26, 2015 at 3:42 PM

    Very good series of paradoxes!

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  6. Kwaku FeniNovember 27, 2015 at 12:54 AM

    Just amazing. All poems are right on point.

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