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Tuesday, December 1, 2015

Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques No. 21 The Technique of Mixing It Up


Late autumn
Shivering in rain and wind
Trees without leaves


Silly, silver moon
Riding on horseback though dark
We have to part soon

Addendum / this haiku came to my mind, while pondering about the technique:

Musing before spring
“Nine bean rows will I have”
The moon for company

http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.de/2015/12/carpe-diem-haiku-writing-techniques-21.html



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11 comments:

  1. humbirdDecember 1, 2015 at 9:39 PM

    Witty!

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  2. TournesolDansUnJardinDecember 2, 2015 at 12:37 AM

    Such beautiful images you have penned...I feel the first one and the second was a good description of the moon...I took a few photos of that bright moon over a community garden.

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  3. Adas AlcoveDecember 2, 2015 at 5:08 AM

    Nicely done! Love the photo and the haiku.

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  4. RheumatologeDecember 2, 2015 at 6:51 AM

    Thanks!

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  5. Bastet's Waka LibraryDecember 2, 2015 at 8:03 AM

    Interesting writes .. I enjoyed them very much ... I especially enjoyed your first haiku .. a real gem and you photo is splendid! Bastet

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  6. Reading PleasureDecember 2, 2015 at 1:34 PM

    Great!

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  7. Carol CampbellDecember 2, 2015 at 4:45 PM

    Really wonderful word play!

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  8. AnonymousDecember 2, 2015 at 8:48 PM

    powerful.

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  9. Sara McNultyDecember 4, 2015 at 5:00 AM

    Very well done! Love the photo.

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  10. lynn__December 4, 2015 at 11:23 PM

    Lovely photo and haiku...the first one is my favorite :)

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  11. ChèvrefeuilleDecember 6, 2015 at 2:15 AM

    Great photo ... nicely composed haiku Lothar.

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