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Tuesday, December 8, 2015

Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques No. 22 double entendre (double meaning)


The wind and rain play
The erect pine shivering
The moon, she enjoys

The concave (凹) fountain
Covered by a convex (凸) lid
Resting peacefully



http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.de/2015/12/carpe-diem-haiku-writing-techniques-22.html
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2 comments:

  1. Bastet's Waka LibraryDecember 9, 2015 at 8:02 AM

    Ah ... nicely done, but I agree with Dove Dungeon .. the symbols are a tad distracting ... Bastet

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  2. ChèvrefeuilleDecember 9, 2015 at 6:57 PM

    Great use of "double entendre" Lothar. very implicit in your second haiku.

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