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wonderful glimpses of snowflakes! especially like the line - wind sings them to sleep
So lovely!
I like the thought of the indecisive flakes coming to a grim end on the glass. Lovely trio.
What a fascinating and imaginative look at winter in the country .. a great trio indeed, Bastet.
There is something very clever about the phrase 'undecided snowflakes,' and your last haiku has such strong imagery.
I like the playfulness, indecision too, and especially the comforting thought that the "wind sings them to sleep" :)
Beautifully done!
wonderful glimpses of snowflakes! especially like the line - wind sings them to sleep
ReplyDeleteSo lovely!
ReplyDeleteI like the thought of the indecisive flakes coming to a grim end on the glass. Lovely trio.
ReplyDeleteWhat a fascinating and imaginative look at winter in the country .. a great trio indeed, Bastet.
ReplyDeleteThere is something very clever about the phrase 'undecided snowflakes,' and your last haiku has such strong imagery.
ReplyDeleteI like the playfulness, indecision too, and especially the comforting thought that the "wind sings them to sleep" :)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done!
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