A "Pi-Ku" has three lines (as every haiku has), but you have to follow another series of syllables. A "Pi-Ku" follows the next rule:
1st line: 3 syllables
2nd line: 1 syllable
3rd line: 4 syllables
Let me give you an example from my archives (Nov 2012) inspired on the above image of Rodin's The Thinker:
the Thinker
lone
no more thoughts
© Chèvrefeuille (2012)
So here are my π-句
This summer
no
longer lockdowns
Passing clouds
too
smell your fragrance
The green wheat
longs
to be mature
Summer wine
what
it is made of
Let summer
end
all woe and war
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Enjoyed these ...well done
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