Thursday, November 7, 2013

Carpe Diem's Tan Renga Challenge Month #VIII, MMT's ''even candent days''

 

even candent days
cannot drive the willow leaves
from their homing place
Magical Mystery Teacher

silence is called golden
leaves fall silently

the wind talks loud and louder
but leaves keep their silence


http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.de/

PS. Will be on vacation during the next weeks, most probably the last entry before returning from New Zealand.

7 comments:

  1. Oh I love both the completions!Leaves are thus golden-autumn hue-wow!

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  2. The leaves are doing their best to cope... Just like us all in the changing seasons. Beautiful.
    Eliz

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  3. I love the second pair of lines.

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  4. Leaves keep their silence... love that

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  5. your words echo its silence - enjoyed your completion. thanks! enjoy your vacation ☺

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  6. I like how you've built further on the silence which the haiku radiates ... nicely done. Have a good vacation Lothar.

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