Thursday, November 7, 2013

Carpe Diem's Revise that haiku #2, Basho's famous 'old pond'

Rain falls into pond
Tears of ancient sorrows
Frog leaves 

Windy night
Moon hovers above the pond
Frogs won’t jump

The muddied pond
They only jump after sunset
These lazy frogs


  1. Wonderful trio Lothar, but that second is my favorite, very nicely written, with a great scenery ... Thank you for participating in this Revising Challenge.

  2. Tears of ancient sorrow-wow!Had to laugh about the lazy frogs:-)