Tuesday, December 8, 2015

Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques No. 22 double entendre (double meaning)


The wind and rain play
The erect pine shivering
The moon, she enjoys

The concave () fountain
Covered by a convex () lid
Resting peacefully



3 comments:

  1. No doubt the moon enjoys :)
    A nice second haiku, too, but the symbols interfere a bit.
    Great takes on the prompt ---

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  2. Ah ... nicely done, but I agree with Dove Dungeon .. the symbols are a tad distracting ... Bastet

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  3. Great use of "double entendre" Lothar. very implicit in your second haiku.

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