Tuesday, June 27, 2017

Haiku in Mainichi Shinbun (毎日新聞)

I've just had the pleasure to review past year's haiku in the Manichi Shinbun (毎日新聞), a Japanese newspaper. I have been delighted to see two of my haiku appearing there.
The second haiku is about a scene on the German autobahn. One can see the airport hotel with the toucan. Now and then you can see geese. Also today in the morning a saw some geese, but a couple of kilometers away from the hotel. Yes, hotel is an awkward word. Depicting another scene, but with a better word, the haiku could look like this:

Passing the tavern
With the gay coloured toucan
Three geese high up


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