Sunday, September 8, 2013

Carpe Diem Haiku O. Mabson Southard's "releases the moon"

 



Running on a chain
Round and round above the earth
The moon never cries

The moon never cries
But looks upon tears in pools
Shed by the unchained

Running on a chain
Moon doesn’t care about release
And he never cries





6 comments:

  1. I loved the second one. Very thoughtful set.

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  2. Love the contrast between the chained moon and the unchained.

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  3. This cascade is a great play with words, still every link in the cascade produce a strong haiku.

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  4. totally unique direction, with the chained and unchained, and the moon that never cries...I absolutely loved the trio, R..,.

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  5. Wonderful series Lothar nice contrast ... well done.

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  6. a very strong moon we have - love the imagery of the moon never crying.

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