Wednesday, September 23, 2015

Carpe Diem Special No. 168 Autumn "tonight's moon"


Waning moon’s sickle
The air is getting colder
Soon too cold for bats

Wet, cold autumn night
Moon is seeking company
Scarecrow invites him

Sickle moon and Venus
Autumn kills the merry sounds
Still no early bird





8 comments:

  1. yes...the moon is lonely too......seeking company.....beautiful.....

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  2. Your 2nd haiku is really very very good..

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  3. Good to see you again!
    I'm fond of the third haiku- enigmatic!

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  4. What a beautiful trio of haiku; that second haiku is my favorite ... thank you for sharing Lothar

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  5. A lovely tris of haiku .. I don't have a particular favourite ku ... each one has a feeling of mystery. Bastet

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  6. I think the scarecrow and the moon make great companions.

    Waiting for Moonrise

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    1. Yes, I guess so. I like Li Bo (李白) drinking with the moon and his shadow as companions.

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