Saturday, November 2, 2013

Carpe Diem's Make the Haiku Complete #3

 

chanting and humming
gongs immerse the green valley
butterflies at ease

chanting and humming
gongs immerse the green valley
smell from the kitchen

chanting and humming
gongs immerse the green valley
scarecrow sighs deeply


5 comments:

  1. sounds, sights, and smells - 3 very nice completions...

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  2. The gentle gong of a butterfly's wings is really great

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  3. My favorite line is "butterflies at ease". Nicely done.

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  4. Thanks Lothar for these three completed haiku.

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  5. I love #3...but I loved each one as I read them ! It was hard to decide my heart's preference with these.
    Peace
    Siggi

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