even candent days
cannot drive the willow
leaves
from their homing place
Magical Mystery Teacher
silence is called golden
leaves fall silently
the wind talks loud and
louder
but leaves keep their silence
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.de/
PS. Will be on vacation during the next weeks, most probably the last entry before returning from New Zealand.
Have a wonderful trip!
ReplyDeleteOh I love both the completions!Leaves are thus golden-autumn hue-wow!
ReplyDeleteThe leaves are doing their best to cope... Just like us all in the changing seasons. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteEliz
I love the second pair of lines.
ReplyDeleteLeaves keep their silence... love that
ReplyDeleteyour words echo its silence - enjoyed your completion. thanks! enjoy your vacation ☺
ReplyDeleteI like how you've built further on the silence which the haiku radiates ... nicely done. Have a good vacation Lothar.
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