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the toad is sleeping in, I guess, but at least he's happy,,
i love how you show different attitudes in both completion. very nice
Nice to see you here again Lothar, that second two-line stanza (sad song of the rippling rain but toad hears a happy tune) is the most in balance with the haiku, and that makes the Tan Renga complete.
Enjoyed both completions.#2 is the one I favor.PeaceSiggi
the toad is sleeping in, I guess, but at least he's happy,,
ReplyDeletei love how you show different attitudes in both completion. very nice
ReplyDeleteNice to see you here again Lothar, that second two-line stanza (sad song of the rippling rain but toad hears a happy tune) is the most in balance with the haiku, and that makes the Tan Renga complete.
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed both completions.
ReplyDelete#2 is the one I favor.
Peace
Siggi