Out in the desert
Serpent moving, shifting sand
Tracks of the dreamtime
Two Ungambilukas
Finishing
Men
Holy trails of ancestors
Remembered
Rock
On the walkabout
The crocs move far from water
And only starlight
(will see, if I can scan a picture or two)
Awesome post Lothar ... I see you have tried the Tilus, which was introduced here at Carpe Diem by Bjorn. Well done.
ReplyDeleteI liked trying out the tilus. The tilus gives the feeling of writing an arrow.
DeleteI think you are right I hadn't seen the tilus in that way, but it sounds great an arrow-like poem ...
DeleteWonderfully creative ~ like 'holy trail of ancestors... ~ Happy Week to you ~
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