Wednesday, May 21, 2014

Carpe Diem Haiku Creation (Aboriginal Mythology)


Out in the desert
Serpent moving, shifting sand
Tracks of the dreamtime

Two Ungambilukas
Finishing
Men

Holy trails of ancestors
Remembered
Rock

On the walkabout
The crocs move far from water
And only starlight



(will see, if I can scan a picture or two)

4 comments:

  1. Awesome post Lothar ... I see you have tried the Tilus, which was introduced here at Carpe Diem by Bjorn. Well done.

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    1. I liked trying out the tilus. The tilus gives the feeling of writing an arrow.

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    2. I think you are right I hadn't seen the tilus in that way, but it sounds great an arrow-like poem ...

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  2. Wonderfully creative ~ like 'holy trail of ancestors... ~ Happy Week to you ~

    artmusedog and Carol (A Creative Harbor)

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