Grey sky, river, bridges
Fragrance of
Spring
Tree shedding its acorn
Rain all night
Rain
Let yourself float downstream
On the Rhine
High
Mighty river flowing
The seagull
White
Golden light upon Rhine
Clouds in blue
Sky
Even in the forest
Shadows and
Light
The leaves are perfect now
In late spring
Green
Heads together they keep
Their voices
Low
Cherry blossoms falling
Paint the ground
Pink
Recently I've seen Björn using a three line form of poem, which is
called Tilus. Kelvin S.M created this form of
micropoetry. He explains it in this way: "The form is divided into two
parts: the first part is composed of two lines following a 6-3 syllable count;
the second part, a one-syllable word to close and/or complete the subject
layered in the first part." For the full text look at the link given
below.
It isn't a haiku. But if you are fond of haiku like
myself, you also likeother forms of brevity. The tilus is like an arrow.
After I've used it myself, where should have
used haiku, I was please to see that also Kristjaan played with the
new form.
I hope that more people of the haiku community will use this new form. I
wish good luck to Kelvin and the tilus!
Links:
kelvin s.m. @kelvinmoustache http://kelvinsm.blogspot.de/2013/10/tilus.html?m=0
Lothar M. Kirsch 祁建德 @Rheumatologe http://rheumatologe.blogspot.de/2014/05/carpe-diem-haiku-creation-aboriginal.html
Kristjaan Panneman
@Chevrefeuille2 http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.de/2014/05/carpe-diems-little-ones-11-tilus-new.html
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