Wednesday, November 4, 2015

Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques No. 17 Leap Linkage




Pitch dark
Striking a match
To stumble

Straight ahead
The winding road
Until it’s even

The rough waves
End in a roaring surf
To roll back


8 comments:

  1. Great set! The third one is very powerful.

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  2. Oh, I do love this trio, especially the first and third. :)

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  3. Beautiful Lothar, as Celestine is saying ... your last haiku is really strong.

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  4. Thanks! The 3rd haiku is also my favourite one.

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  5. All three are wonderful but the second one is my favorite!

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  6. Moving haiku..my fave is second with mysterious winding road....

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