Wednesday, November 11, 2015

Carpe Diem Haiku Writing Techniques No. 18 Yugen


A pendulum clock
Aching with every tick-
Tock tick-tock tick-tock




After the harvest
The fields are left for resting
What about scarecrows?


In the netherworld
The pink Spring cherry blossoms
Will also be pink

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9 comments:

  1. Excellent yugen haiku Lothar. I like the 'mystery' in your last haiku.

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  2. Nicely done ... I feel the ache in the first, and the third makes me pause ... very thoughtful ...!

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  3. The first two are very thoughtful...I really felt the yugen buried within

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  4. Well done! Great imagery. I can feel the aches with each tick.

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  5. Wow ... and scarecrows sleep of course to be awoken in spring ;-) Bastet

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