raindrops on bamboo
shimmer in the sunlight
little diamonds
© Chèvrefeuille
I’ve written two stanzas for Chèvrefeuille’s haiku.
Wind approaches suddenly
Gone is the thief with riches
And then they all disappear
The bamboo nods in beauty
Lovely idea of the wind stealing the diamonds!
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