Stony, narrow path
Slippery after the rain
But the rat escapes
Taking my picnic
The waterfall’s soft
murmur
Vacation starts now
The night with no moon
Clogs stumbling on the board
walk
Silent cat sees all
Down the narrow road
Reaching out for twinkling
stars
A happy return
pause,
ReplyDeleteyour words speak, lovely haiku.
That silent cat was good. A lot in the haiku...and must be worked out!
ReplyDeleteLovely post ... Bastet
ReplyDeleteLove the cat and happy return.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done!
ReplyDeleteExcellent!
ReplyDeleteI like these haiku Lothar, but as Hamish (Forest Gunn) says that silent cat is a beauty very well done.
ReplyDeleteI was wondering if you ever thought of changing
ReplyDeletethe layout of your blog? Its very well written; I love what youve got to say.
But maybe you could a little more in the way of content so people
could connect with it better. Youve got an awful lot of text for only
having one or 2 pictures. Maybe you could space
it out better?
Dear Bot,
DeleteHaiku are very condensed and not an awful lot of text. Maybe you might consider taking part in the South Korean space out contest.