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wonderful glimpses of snowflakes! especially like the line - wind sings them to sleep
I like the thought of the indecisive flakes coming to a grim end on the glass. Lovely trio.
What a fascinating and imaginative look at winter in the country .. a great trio indeed, Bastet.
There is something very clever about the phrase 'undecided snowflakes,' and your last haiku has such strong imagery.
I like the playfulness, indecision too, and especially the comforting thought that the "wind sings them to sleep" :)