Thursday, August 22, 2013

Carpe Diem Haiku Tan Renga „Cricket Silence“

cricket silence
between scraping sounds
autumn begins                                   (Jane Reichhold)

coloured foliage falling
each bearing written wishes

a light rain leaves damp the leaves
night will start with wafts of mists

harvest fires are burning
reminiscing idle times


  1. Awesome Lothar you have shared three possible completions of the Tan Renga ... I like that second two-line stanza the most, that one makes the Tan renga really complete in my opinion.

  2. Three great completions ,,, hard to choose a favorite.. but I love the messages in the leaf.