cricket silence
between scraping sounds
autumn begins (Jane
Reichhold)
coloured foliage falling
each bearing written wishes
a light rain leaves damp the
leaves
night will start with wafts
of mists
harvest fires are burning
reminiscing idle times
Awesome Lothar you have shared three possible completions of the Tan Renga ... I like that second two-line stanza the most, that one makes the Tan renga really complete in my opinion.
ReplyDeleteThree great completions ,,, hard to choose a favorite.. but I love the messages in the leaf.
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