Thursday, March 28, 2013

Carpe Diem Haiku Tako (kite) 凧




 
The sunny beach
Alone with waves, sky and wind
Flying with the kite

Letting go
The string of the kite
Fly on or crash

Fresh colours
The kite gains the sky
Bested by birds


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9 comments:

  1. love the third one... the implications, the outcome...

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  2. It's a wonderful, exhilerating feeling watching kites in action! I guess the birds wonder about those birds flying without wings!

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  3. Me too...third one is favorite.

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  4. Beautiful set...but, the third one is immaculate!

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  5. I get the impression that the birds 'bombed' the kite until it crashed. And birds only have one weapon! :)

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  6. the 3rd is my favorite too...

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  7. That third one is really a wonderful haiku Lothar. I like that composition and as Adriana describes it.

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  8. Agreed by all...awesome set, the 3rd a winner !
    Peace
    Siggi

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