Saturday, May 4, 2013

Carpe Diem Haiku Troiku




Flamingo clouds
Like in a highland lake
Some dark geese passing


 
Flamingo clouds
Win against cherry blossoms
Cat purrs on the chair

Like in a highland lake
Spring feelings are mirrored
To vanish into dreams

Some dark geese passing
Into this perfect evening
Pour some tea

This is trying on Kristjaan's suggestion of a new form of haiku, the troiku, look here:
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.de/p/troiku-new-form-of-haiku.html

6 comments:

  1. I love this Troiku Lothar ... I am glad that you would like to share this with us. Maybe I can include a linking possibility.

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  2. I've published this troiku a while ago. But coudn't place the link hitherto.

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  3. perfect - flamingo clouds! the first and last verses were my faves, and congrats on a wonderful troika...

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  4. I've seen those clouds that move across the sky like a flock of geese. You've described them well!Tanka Whirl

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  5. Oh this is a great troiku.. despite an autumny feel

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