Spring is dead
Stream through the barren valley
Only tears of stones
While the meadows dry
The valley stream tells stories
To laugh and to weep
http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.de/
Addendum:
Cutting stone
The water knife descends
Freed souls arise
both are full of meanings....love the line 'tears of stone'...deep one
ReplyDeleteAnd oh, how I love to listen to those holy tales told by a valley stream!
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beautiful and strong haiku!
ReplyDeleteOh the tears of stone.
ReplyDeleteOh,I loved both, but the second one is breathtaking!!:)
ReplyDeleteI can feel the sadness in these, although the "freed souls arise" feels beautiful.
ReplyDeleteVery very nice. Love the last one with the water knife.
ReplyDeletealoha rheumatologe. i like in your Addendum the idea of a water knife that cuts stone. that is a very cool image. aloha.
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